At the opening of this novel a Shade, which is a kind of evil sorcerer with red hair and eyes and superhuman
strength, lies in ambush. He is accompanied by Urgals, a species of hulking, ogrish monsters best
suited for use as disposable minions. They wait to attack some elves. The symbolism is crude:
elegant and attractive elves versus dark and foul-looking creatures. No prizes for guessing who the
bad guys are, then.
Eragon is a boy of 15 who has to catch game in order to feed himself and his family. Whilst out in the hills
his hunting is interrupted by an explosion, and the arrival of a large blue stone. Time are hard, so he hopes
to sell it in order to buy meat to feed himself and his family for a few more days. But when the stone
turns out to be an egg, and a dragon egg at that, Eragon finds the implacable hand of destiny smacking
him around the ears and pointing him away from the life of a simple farm boy.
The early chapters of Eragon are very clichéd, derivative of many other novels in this genre without
bringing anything new or insightful. The author's extreme youth does come through in the writing,
unfortunately. This book was written and published during Christopher Paolini's mid to late teens, and
his lack of life experience is reflected in the characters he has created.
Eragon soon discovers that dragons and their riders attract all the wrong kind of attention in
Alagaesia. The further he travels the more unrest and suffering he discovers. Urgals are encroaching
into new territories, whilst war between the Empire and the Varden looks increasingly likely.
Luckily for Eragon he has the help of Brom, the town's old storyteller. Brom seems to know an awful
lot more about dragons, magic, and the king's business than any small town entertainer ought to. King
Galbatorix is widely disliked and feared, and with Brom's help Eragon learns just how ruthless and
underhand the king truly is.
The dialogue is peppered with ham archaic speech, abounding with phrases such as "Woe unto you!"
and so on, and this drives home the hackneyed aspects of this book. However, the story gains
personality and complexity as it progresses, and it improves steadily. The political situation becomes
more nuanced the further in you read, and there are hints that certain characters have something to
hide or stories to tell. The relationship between Eragon and Saphira strengthens, although in some
ways the pair of them are a little too good to be true, too heroic and noble to be entirely
credible.
There's enough mystery sown in
Eragon to make you want to pick up the sequel. Some of the
flaws in this novel carry the hallmark of an inexperienced writer, which is entirely understandable. Yet
in spite of this Paolini has achieved something that authors decades older than him don't always
manage, which is to write an entertaining narrative set in an immersive world and built around
likeable central characters. It's a promising début.
3/5
Review © Rosalind Jackson